Continue Writing

So...I am now starting to go over my paper in detail and make some changes.  Although I did pretty well on my rough draft, there are still a few area's that I need to pay more attention.  One area is the thesis.  My thesis, just as everyone else, is the focal point of the paper.  The problem with mine is that I have to make it a little more direct because right now I don't have a strong argument. This should be a fun night of writing!